Rapids

short poem please read and rate?

apathy kills (mind chatter) stream of consciousness dreams of monstrousness nightmares portentous rage in dreams unconscious bring down the dams you've built uptown and downriver and let the rapids light your world.

Public Comments

1. wow... pretty good! you should enter it somewhere.. i really really really enjoyed the last quote... "bring down the dams you've built uptown and downriver and let the rapids light your world"- that is fabulous
2. I like it, best part of it is the last two lines, they really grab me.