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"Fair Warning" for C/C, Do you always heed fair warning?

Fair Warning There was a fire aflame bedded deep within his heart he set sail through life as if warm fair winds were always at his back came wayward windward winds he'd sail onward with laughter as loud as rapids raging roar his daily compass was his heart, it was not until the floods flowed with no land in sight he looked for a map took off his mask and shared his heart

Public Comments

1. This is such an unusual write! At first I thought it was good ole Noah, but....someone else who took off his rose colored glasses, faced reality, and allowed all to see tears? Evil? Great alliteration here! Now THIS is a true POEM!!!! Great going, gal! Good Morning!
2. Great piece Jenny!
3. I figure anyone who needs to warn me about something has a vested interest in my behaviour and as with all comments about my life by people who are not me, I smile politely and file the advice under crap.
4. I like this a lot, Jenny. A "glass-half-full" light hearted approach to life and its trials.
5. Interesting, I am going to point out a spot that bothers me and it is wayward windward winds... I would find another word either for wind or windward, as I do not like the repetition for some reason it sticks in my gizzard
6. I like this Jenny very much. There's heart and heartache here; this piece clearly shows that those spirits who tend to be life's encouragers with their uncompromising positive outlooks, also suffer and meet with sorrowful times in life.
7. I neither heed not give it!