Rapids

My poem (River running right through me?

My poem (River running right through me) a poem about love? the cycle of makeing love when someone you love touch you" You feel the warm flowing right through your body, it feel like a river running right through you' your body begain to heat up like the flame in the fire place and when you look into each othere eyes .you dont see them you only see the reflecting of their spriti gleaming back at you .and when your lips meet it feel like a explodeing of you affection and you begain to beg for for more dont stop here go further and when he do the river begain to flower right through you like a warm stream...........

Public Comments

1. You couldn't have said it better. You must be in love.